Your best paragraph

In this section you are going to find the best paragraphs made by Composition I students.

Diana´s Paragraph

I think this was my best paragraph because I made less mistakes as possible and I got a good grade. While I was writing, I put my effort on it and I read and proofread many times. I felt happy because the inspiration came to my mind quickly.

Karenina´s Paragraph

I would like to talk about all my journals but as you know I am not feel so proud of them because I get bad grades in some of them but I going to talk about the first one because my wish has been to pass the subject, before taking the first composition class I had negative attitudes because I was afraid of fail again however, my thinking has begun to change when I saw my first grade because in that moment I feel that my performance has improved as a result of my effort. I gained a lot of experience from working with a good teacher.

Erick´s Paragraph

This paragraph is about my first journal and it was about my first Composition I class. I consider this paragraph the best one because I did not commit a lot of mistakes but then in my following journals I made a lot of mistakes. So this is my best paragraph.